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 Rattail Manual
 ==============
 
-This is "the reference manual" for Rattail, intended for developers and system
-administrators.  It assumes the reader is involved with the creation or
-maintenance of a Poser/Rattail app.  It tries to explain the concepts involved
-and hopefully tie them all together.
+This is "the reference manual" for Rattail.
+
+It is intended for developers and/or system administrators.  It
+assumes the reader is involved with the creation or maintenance of a
+Poser/Rattail app.
 
 This manual is primarily organized around the possible "layers" of a
 Poser/Rattail app: